Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Vanya Metaphors Poem.

In Te Ngahere  we have been learning how to use metaphors in our writing, also we made a poem about ourselves using metaphors. I did well at fixing some of the metaphors. I really enjoyed learning how to use metaphors I thought that it would be hard to use metaphors but when I had a go at metaphors I knew how to do it. Our Walt was to use language features appropriately showing a developing understanding of effect, this is my first draft.


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  1. Kia ora Vanya,
    I really like your blogpost about your metaphor poem. You were really descriptive and your metaphors were outstanding. I liked your last metaphor the most. I really enjoyed reading your metaphors and I can’t wait to see more of this from you.
    Yours truly, Tia

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